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Element Battle

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Remember that lineart? Yep, I decided to finish it. XD However, it didn't come out as well as I hoped, so I'll just say that this was a practice. Which it was.

Right now, I'm just kinda tired. XD Really, I can't think of much to say other than how I kinda like the water.
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I very much like the color balance here between the warm and cool contrasts.

As far as composition goes, I think giving more mass to the wave would help make it feel more threatening and combative. Just as well, the pose on the character on the left needs more 'umf'. His back and hands feel a little too rigid and straight for something that gives the impression of watery. The guy on the right is fine, though I see a part between his wrist and hand that looks cut and needs some touching up. The water under the guy on the left also feels really separated from the water surrounding him. Blending them together more would alleviate that issue.

The background texturing on the rocks, while understanding that it isn't the focal point, is a little awkward because of the blurriness of the texture work. And I think overall, if you bring the bg up to the same level as the characters in the foreground, this would feel much more unified.

Perhaps tilting the picture would also make this feel visually more exciting as well.

Aside from that it's well one an I rather like it!